This Week in Fiction

Téa Obreht on Letting Your Characters Flounder

蒂亚·奥布雷特谈如何让你笔下的人物深陷困境
The author discusses her story “Family Lore.”
作者讨论她的短篇小说《家族传说》。
A photo of Ta Obreht in purple. The background has some cursive writing on a red background.
Illustration by The New Yorker; Source photograph by Ilan Harel

In your story “Family Lore,” a couple have just returned home from the hospital with their newborn baby. The husband notices their dog engaging with a possibly sick bat on their balcony, and this sets off a spiral of events, as he tries to figure out whether the dog has caught rabies, without alerting his wife to the danger. How did this plotline come to you?

在你的短篇小说《家族传说》中,一对夫妇刚带着刚出生的宝宝从医院回到家。丈夫发现他们的狗在阳台上跟一只可能患病的蝙蝠纠缠,由此引发一连串事件——他试图在不惊动妻子的情况下弄清狗是否感染了狂犬病。这个情节是怎么来的?

I rarely draw direct inspiration from my own life for my fiction—that’s what other people’s lives are for!—but, in this case, shortly after my husband and I brought our first baby home, our dog really did get hold of a bat that then tested positive for rabies. This resulted in the dog being placed in a forty-five-day home quarantine, which, compounded by the isolation of the newborn trenches and the ongoing pandemic, created the most psychologically debilitating situation I’ve ever endured. I’ve suffered from contamination O.C.D. and responsibility O.C.D. since adolescence, and my experience of that month and a half was essentially staying up all night to either nurse the baby or watch the dog for symptoms. It was horrible. Plus, no one we knew had been through anything like it, so no one could offer us any real comfort. All we had was the wildly contradictory advice we received from the vet (who was not worried), the pediatricians (who were low-to-medium worried), and animal control (who were basically telling us to pick out an urn for the dog).

我很少直接从自己的生活中为小说汲取灵感——那本来就是别人生活的用处嘛!——但这一次,在我和丈夫把第一个宝宝带回家后不久,我们的狗确实抓到一只蝙蝠,后来检测出狂犬病阳性。结果狗被要求居家隔离四十五天,再加上新生儿阶段的与世隔绝和持续中的疫情,造成了我这辈子经历过的最摧残心理的处境。我从青春期起就患有污染强迫症和责任强迫症,那一个半月的经历基本上就是整夜不睡,要么喂奶,要么盯着狗看有没有症状。太可怕了。而且我们认识的人里没有一个经历过类似的事,所以没人能给我们任何真正的安慰。我们手里只有互相矛盾到离谱的建议:兽医(完全不担心)、儿科医生(低到中度担心)、动物管控部门(基本上是在让我们给狗挑骨灰盒)。

You began writing this story during that quarantine period but didn’t finish it until a month after the birth of your second child, almost four years later. Why did it take so long?

你是在隔离期间开始写这篇小说的,但直到近四年后、第二个孩子出生一个月后才完成。为什么花了这么久?

I actually tried to process the incident by fictionalizing it while it was still happening. When that failed, I tried writing it several different times over the years, always from the perspective of the wife. But it was too close to home, and it kept getting tainted by reality. Then, maybe a month or two before the birth of our second baby, my husband and I were reminiscing about the rabies scare, and he said, “If I’d known how awful those forty-five days were going to be, I would have hoofed that fucking bat off the balcony, and you never would have known about it.” That changed my whole approach to the story. It gave me a new premise and orientation, and enough distance from the actual events to see the humor and the madness of it.

我其实在事情还在发生时就试图通过虚构化来处理这段经历。失败之后,这些年里我又试了好几次,每次都从妻子的视角来写。但这件事离我太近了,总是被现实污染。后来,大概在第二个宝宝出生前一两个月,我和丈夫回忆起那次狂犬病惊吓,他说:“要是我早知道那四十五天会那么难熬,我早就一脚把那只该死的蝙蝠踢下阳台了,你根本不会知道。”这句话改变了我对整个故事的构思。它给了我一个新的前提和方向,也让我跟真实事件之间有了足够的距离,得以看到其中的荒诞与疯狂。

Arriving home with a first baby—especially after a long stretch of trying and failing to have a child—can be overwhelming. In the story, it has been the wife’s role to worry about everything and the husband’s role to reassure her. Why do you think he goes so far off the deep end now?

带着第一个宝宝回家——尤其是在经历了漫长而屡屡失败的求子过程之后——可能让人不堪重负。在故事里,妻子一直负责操心一切,丈夫则负责安抚她。你觉得他这次为什么会彻底失控?

Because his decision to conceal the incident with the bat isolates him from his wife. New parenthood is already isolating, but at least it’s something they’ve been preparing to face as a team. Now he’s ensnared himself in the situation with the bat, and everything he does removes him further and further from the domestic bubble and the new reality on which he is supposed to be focussing.

因为他决定隐瞒蝙蝠事件,这让他与妻子隔绝开来。初为人父母本来就让人孤立,但至少那是他们准备作为团队一起面对的事。现在他把自己困进了蝙蝠事件里,他做的每一件事都让他离那个家庭小泡泡、离他本该专注的新现实越来越远。

The story is both a comedy and a thriller: each time the husband makes a seemingly logical decision it pushes him farther into comic absurdity and ratchets up the tension for the reader—who, at a certain point, can no longer imagine this guy digging himself out of the hole he’s jumped into. How challenging was it to balance plausibility and ridiculousness, fun and genuine anxiety, when writing the story?

这个故事既是喜剧又是惊悚片:丈夫每一次看似合乎逻辑的决定都把他推向更深的荒诞喜剧,同时也为读者不断拧紧发条——到了某个节点,读者已经无法想象这家伙还能从自己跳进去的坑里爬出来。在写作中,平衡可信度与荒诞感、趣味与真实的焦虑,有多难?

I’m not sure why, but more and more of late I’ve found myself drawn to characters who can’t stop making mistakes. It’s challenging, but it’s also incredibly fun to refrain from protecting your characters and let them just flounder. In “Family Lore,” I also wanted to capture the vulnerability of finding yourself catapulted into total responsibility for another human being overnight. Any sense of horizon disappears. All sense of balance and proportionality is obliterated. You don’t know if something is a mild threat or a serious one. You don’t know whether something is going to last an hour or a week. For me, so much of the tension in this story came from the husband’s inability to figure out what’s freaking him out the most: the bat? The Cesarean? The fact that the baby came early? His wife’s mental state? The fact that everyone around him seems to be a little unstable?

我不太确定为什么,但最近我越来越被那些不停犯错的角色所吸引。不去保护你的人物、让他们就那么瞎扑腾,这很有挑战性,但也极其有趣。在《家族传说》里,我还想捕捉那种一夜之间被抛入对另一个生命全权负责的脆弱感。任何对未来的展望都消失了。所有的平衡感和分寸感都被摧毁了。你不知道某件事是轻微威胁还是严重威胁。你不知道某件事会持续一小时还是一周。对我来说,这个故事里很大一部分张力来自丈夫无法弄清到底是什么最让他抓狂:是蝙蝠?剖腹产?宝宝早产?妻子的精神状态?还是他身边每个人似乎都有点不太稳定?

At the beginning of “Family Lore,” the wife has a premonition that something very bad is going to happen. It’s possible to read the conclusion of the story as confirmation of that prediction. But it’s also possible to read it as a happy ending, in which no serious damage has been done. Did you want to leave it up to the reader to decide which option to believe?

在《家族传说》的开头,妻子有一种预感,觉得会有非常糟糕的事情发生。你可以把故事的结局解读为对那个预感的印证。但也可以把它解读为一个圆满结局——没有造成任何严重伤害。你是想把这个选择权留给读者吗?

Throughout this story, the husband is unwittingly chasing a sense of relief. I think all he really wants is a moment to recalibrate, a moment to gather himself for the journey ahead, which, given that he is now a parent, is really going to last the rest of his life. And I think he does get that moment in the end.

在整个故事中,丈夫一直在不自觉地追逐一种解脱感。我觉得他真正想要的只是一个重新校准的时刻,一个让自己为接下来的旅程做好准备的时刻——而鉴于他现在已经为人父母,这段旅程真的会持续他的余生。而我认为他最终确实得到了那个时刻。

The story is set in Austin, Texas, where there is, in fact, a very large bat colony. Neither of the characters is originally from Texas. What else made this city the right backdrop for the story?

故事设定在得克萨斯州奥斯汀,那里确实有一个非常大的蝙蝠群落。两个角色都不是得州本地人。还有什么原因让这座城市成为这个故事合适的背景?

Despite its takeover by ultra-rich ghouls, Austin has remained a kind of paradise of youth. All the things that would have made it irresistible to the couple once upon a time are incompatible with the early days of parenthood: it’s bawdy, irreverent, loud, hot, fun, and unpredictable. What the husband wants is quiet and calm. Instead, he is surrounded by strangers whose names he realizes he doesn’t even know, all gearing up for a wild Halloween weekend. None of them are in the same phase of life as him, and this amplifies his panic and makes him feel even more powerless and alone. ♦

尽管奥斯汀已被超级富豪的食尸鬼们占领,它仍然保有一种青春的天堂气息。那些曾经让这对夫妇无法抗拒的一切,都与育儿初期格格不入:这座城市粗俗、不羁、喧闹、炎热、有趣,而且不可预测。丈夫想要的是安静与平静。然而他周围全是陌生人,他意识到自己甚至不知道他们的名字,所有人都在为一个疯狂的万圣节周末做准备。他们中没有一个人跟他处于同一人生阶段,这放大了他的恐慌,让他感到更加无力和孤独。 ♦

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